How To Keep Your Reader's Attention

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By Glenn Stok

Glenn Stok has been elected HubNugget by the HubMob community for writing this Hub.
Glenn Stok has been elected HubNugget by the HubMob community for writing this Hub.


The only way to keep your reader involved with what you have to say is to give them what they want.

To show the reader that your article matches their interest, you need to let them know what to expect in the first sentence.

If they see that it's what they want, they will keep reading. That's the best idea to grab reader's attention that I have discovered.

Writing articles on various topics on HubPages has given me the opportunity to experiment and learn techniques that work.

I've learned that search engine ranking is based on keeping the reader’s attention.

It's useless if people hit your page and immediately go away. That means only one thing, that your article had nothing of value for them.

It's important to understand what kind of traffic you want. You only want those readers who were searching for your subject. It has value to them. That's how to gain the reader's attention, and their loyalty.



How To Grab The Attention Of Your Reader

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The first goal is to get past that first few seconds of uncertainty. This can be done by quickly showing the reader that the subject matter matches perfectly with what they are looking for. You need to grab their attention.

Taking that into account, it is important to avoid keywords or tags that may be too general. That will only attract people who were searching for something else, but had used one or more of your keywords in their search.

Once they hit your page and see that it is not what they want, they leave in a hurry. That short visit actually causes the search engines to reduce your ranking a tidbit each time it happens. This is because it indicates that the information on the page was useless to the person doing the search.

If you have too many cases like that, it can push you way down. Down to the point where you may never come up in a search at all.

One the other hand, if readers stay for a long time, then your content must obviously be useful and meaningful. So you get some extra points in your ranking. The more of those, the higher you go and eventually you will discover more traffic being sent your way.

Another way to grab attention is to pique the reader’s attention with a visual as well as an introduction. The introduction should be very short. Remember, you don’t have their attention yet.

Make sure the web page that does not look intimidating. Use short sentences and short paragraphs. Leave some white space and don’t crowd the text. They see that before they even start reading.

A visual image that represents your subject is useful. It is a quick way to show the reader they have found something related to the subject matter they are interested in. An image will be noticed before they start reading.

If anything chases them away before they even start reading, you’ve got to fix it. Google Analytics shows you when that is happening. I see some hits in my report that show 2 or 3 seconds for a visit. I am sure that means that something scared away my reader. Unless I get really fast speed-readers!



Search Engine Ranking Based On How Long They Stay

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The search engines monitor how long visitors stay on a web page. The longer they stay, presumably reading, the more appropriate the page must be to the search that was requested.

The search engines use that information to improve their response to keyword queries. In essence, this affects your ranking.

If you are a website developer, a blogger, an online newspaper or magazine article writer or if you are a freelance writer, you can put this to good use and improve your rank in a search by doing things that keep the attention of your readers.

How can this be done? Well, the most obvious method is to provide high quality content. You already know that. But the reader will not know if it is good quality or not upon first hitting your web page.

You've accomplished the first step... grabbing attention. Now you need to keep working with quality all the way through.



What Else Can Be Done To Keep Your Reader's Attention?

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Okay, we discussed a few ideas for grabbing the reader’s attention. Now let’s discuss how you keep your reader around as long as possible.


  1. Visual eye candy is helpful. As a reader reads, they need to take a break every once is a while to rest their eyes. You can give them that by using images. But these images must be appropriate. They must relate to the subject. If you just randomly place anything on your page for images, then the visitor will see those before they start reading, and you’ll lose them for thinking they stumbled upon the wrong thing. Also be careful about copyright if you are using images from other sources. Always check the copyright. Even Creative Commons has rules. Many times they ask that you display a credit to the originator.
  2. Useful and easy-to-read content are important. Give the reader something in return for visiting, either information, tips, ideas, anything to provide a return for visiting your page. As they read, they realize they are getting something and they want more. So they will stick around and keep reading. When you complete a blog, hub, business web page, or whatever, go back and read it completely from start to finish. Pay attention to your writing from a reader’s point of view. Are you rambling on? Are you going off on tangents? Are you unclear with things? Are you failing to make your point? Any of these things can cause a reader to become frustrated and go away. You want to focus on keeping their attention. That's what I've been trying to do here. How am I doing?
  3. Embedding a video or two that reinforces the subject matter can also be useful for two reasons. It adds to the information, and it keeps the visitor on your page that much longer. The search engine doesn’t need to know what they are doing. Just the fact that the reader has your page in their web browser. The longer the better for your Search Engine Ranking.
  4. Help the reader read with a good writing format. Separate thoughts into blocks of text in such a way that it becomes easier for the reader to grasp the meaning. Use helpful headings for sections. You might find it helpful to separate various thoughts into numbered or bulleted paragraphs like I did here.
  5. Make sure you don’t have any misspelled words. So often I see a writer thinks “alot” is a word. There is no such word in English. I see that a lot. And I bet if you allot more time to spell checking, you’ll do better with ranking. Ahh, did you catch that? This “allot” has TWO l's and a totally different meaning. I also see improper use of “there” and “their” and “they’re.” There are times when they're not paying attention to their spelling.



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I often wonder if misspelling causes search engines to lower one’s ranking. I wouldn’t be surprised that they do.

So if you are bad at spelling, use a spelling checker. No one has to know. Most word processors, such as Microsoft Word, include both a thesaurus and a spell checker. Use them.You can also pick up a copy of a Writer’s Handbook from your library. I found this to be a great source of information.



Repeat Visitors Imply Usefulness Of Your Article

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Search engines also rank by repeat traffic. Google Analytics reports show how many hits are unique and how many are repeat visitors. So I assume they are also using that info to determine how useful your page is.

If people are coming back, it is a surefire indication that you have good and useful content that the reader wants more of. So the search engines will oblige.

Once again, these things take a lot of time for the search engines to build up upon. You need to be patient. Monitor the Anaytics reports and be ready to make changes when you see the need. Just don’t become manic with it. If you start changing things every time you think you found a problem, you will never know what is working.

So take it slow. Keep a close eye on the extensive information you get from those Google reports and learn from it. Try to discover what's working to bring back repeat readers, and then continue to do whatever works.



Get To Know Your Google Analytics Reports

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Where Are Analytics Reports?

  1. Click on the "My Account" tab on HubPages
  2. Click on "Affiliate Settings"
  3. Click on "Check Your Analytics Statistics"
  4. Login to your Analytics Account.
  5. Click on "View Report" for HubPages.

Then select any report you want...Dashboard, Intelligence, Visitors, Traffic Sources, Content, AdSense, or Goals.

Each report lets you dig deeper into the data. So give yourself time to learn all of it. If you get lost, you can always click back to the Google Analytics Dashboard.

Get to know the Google Analytics Reports and all the information in them. That information is a goldmine.

You can even see your AdSense revenue associated with your individual hubs. You can see where visitors came from, what keywords they used to find you, how long they stayed and where they went next.

The Analytics Reports can keep you busy in a worthwhile way. You'll discover if your readers clicked to another of your hubs, or if they exit away altogether. That tells you that you may need to change something to keep them around.

If you haven't already had your Google Analytics code in your HubPages, you need to sign up for Google Analytics and add your Analytics Affiliate Code to HubPages. Then let it track for a few weeks to have any kind of useful information in your reports.

Getting and holding web traffic is based on hard work and using the tools I mentioned. It's a way to let the search engines “learn” if you are worthy of the traffic. If you are, they will be glad to send people your way. But as I said, it takes time for the search engines to learn. Be patient and stay on top of things. Good Luck!

If you found this helpful, check out my Table Of Contents of all the support topics I've written to help other Hubbers.


Copyright © 2009 Glenn Stok

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HubMob Reader Comments

Anath profile image

Anath 2 years ago

I get lost every time I look at Google Analytics. There is so much information in there that I don't really know what to look for and what to do with it. I am sure I could be using it for my benefit but it is still an unknow field to me.

Thanks for all the other tips, interesting the effect of unique vs. repeat visits.

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Glenn Stok Hub Author 2 years ago

Anath, I get lost with it too. Just take your time and click around the left-hand column in Google Analytics. That's how I discovered all this various information and charts. Over time, you will make some sense out of all the data and you'll start seeing patterns.

An interesting pattern is how many readers come back and when. I noticed by reviewing the Visitor Loyalty table, I see that roughly 47% are new people each day. 38% revisit in the same day and only 3% the come back next day. Then it drops until 15 to 30 days later, when old visitors come back and look again. I guess it might mean that I have readers who are remembering me and curious to see what's I've done since their last visit, or need to check out something they previously read. Either way, I find that encouraging.

I also see that I have a large number of bounces. Those are people who hit a hub and left in a few seconds. That's why I feel these reports are so important to use, even if they are difficult.

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CMHypno Level 6 Commenter 2 years ago

Thanks for all the great info Glenn. I must admit that my favourite part of Google Analytics is looking at the map of where people come from! Congratulations on your HubNugget nomination!

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mega1 Level 3 Commenter 2 years ago

Thank you thank you!

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Glenn Stok Hub Author 2 years ago

CMHypno: thanks. I am honored to have been nominated.

mega1: you are very welcome.

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Princessa Level 3 Commenter 2 years ago

Thanks for sharing this info in a very easy to understand way.

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Glenn Stok Hub Author 2 years ago

Princessa, Thanks for your kind comment, and welcome back. Hope you have a nice few days off in Paris.

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janiek13 Level 2 Commenter 2 years ago

I have alot ( oops I mean a lot) of problems making sense of google analytics, will try harder, now. Thanks for the info

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Glenn Stok Hub Author 2 years ago

janiek13, you are soooo funny. You put a smile on my face.

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janiek13 Level 2 Commenter 2 years ago

Thank you, sir.

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Glenn Stok Hub Author 2 years ago

janiek13, You are very welcome. Thanks for your interest.

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shazwellyn Level 4 Commenter 2 years ago

Thanks for this! I have bookmarked this article for future reference. An example of a good hub that will get a repeat viewing from me for a start!

Shaz x

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Money Glitch Level 1 Commenter 2 years ago

Congrats on being selected as a Hubnugget Wannabe. This is a nice hub with lots of useful information. Thanks for sharing!

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Glenn Stok Hub Author 2 years ago

Thanks for your comments, my latest valued readers...shazwellyn and Money Glitch.

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ripplemaker Level 6 Commenter 2 years ago

Hi Glenn, I seem to be having difficulty understanding Google analytics hahaahah But I understood your message here perfectly. Gosh, now you just gave my spirit a boost by reminding me to write more for our website. :) Thank you for sharing this in simple terms that my brain can understand.

Congrats for your hubnugget nomination. Remember to vote and promote please: http://hubpages.com/_hubnuggets10/hub/im-dreaming-

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Glenn Stok Hub Author 2 years ago

ripplemaker, Thanks for the feedback. We all learn so much here on HubPages from each other that we can use in our business sites too.

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Guidemyspirit 2 years ago

I think keywords and long keywords are the biggest factor when it comes to on sight optimization. Ranking high in Google like you mention is the off site heaviest factor. It all depends on how you are liked by search engines, bringing in the traffic is their job, not only that they traffic is where the money can be made, anything else is really a waste in my opinion. Unless of course you are looking for a fan club on your site that is! Nice post though, keep on writing Glenn.

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Glenn Stok Hub Author 2 years ago

Guidemyspirit, I appreciate your remarks. Glad to have you as a reader.

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Carol the Writer 2 years ago

How funy! I like it alot. Their are some good ideas their. You insured that we enjoyed ourselfs. Thanks alot again.

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Glenn Stok Hub Author 2 years ago

Carol the Writer, you are soooo funny. lol.

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create a page 2 years ago

I thoroughly enjoyed learning from you Glenn Stok. I rated your hub up and I will be following you so that I can learn more from you. Good job!

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brightforyou Level 1 Commenter 2 years ago

Lots of really great information - thanks!

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Glenn Stok Hub Author 2 years ago

Thank you to everyone for your comments. My nomination for HubNugget Wannabe is a result of all your interest, for which I am very grateful.

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EngagementRing 2 years ago

Great hub Glenn! I think when you are doing SEO you concentrate more on getting people to your site than actually keeping there. This made me realize that I need to focus on both.

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Glenn Stok Hub Author 2 years ago

EngagementRing, thanks for reading and for your comments.

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Lita C. Malicdem Level 4 Commenter 2 years ago

Just hit the "up" button for this very good hub. Am learning a lot, I can't quit now. I'll try to follow. Thanks for sharing your best weapons.

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Glenn Stok Hub Author 2 years ago

Lita, thanks for the thumbs up.

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uliveulearn 2 years ago

This was just as you said "useful and easy to read". I have not looked at how to set up Google Analytics with Hubpages yet. Thanks for the important reminder. Must add that to my to do list. So much to do, so much to learn, it can be overwhelming but reading your helpful tips helped ease the pain of my throbbing head. Thanks

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Glenn Stok Hub Author 2 years ago

uliveulearn, thanks for your feedback and also for following me.

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amillar Level 5 Commenter 2 years ago

Nice one Glenn.

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derekmaxmarketing 2 years ago

I am so glad I tripped across this article, Glenn! Thank you so much for your helpful tips... I will continue to tweak my hubs and hope to make positive changes. Perhaps you can check out a few of my articles and give me some suggestions?? I would really appreciate it!

Thanks once again, Glenn!

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shazwellyn Level 4 Commenter 2 years ago

Ummmm... DS hehehe x

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Glenn Stok Hub Author 2 years ago

derekmaxmarketing, Thanks for the feedback. I'll definitely check out your hubs too.

Thanks to everyone else who commented. I'll be looking to see what you've written as well.

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Albertttt 2 years ago

Excellent info. Thanks.

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Jane Grey Level 3 Commenter 2 years ago

Very helpful, very well-written! I enjoyed your grammar puns a lot.

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Lita C. Malicdem Level 4 Commenter 2 years ago

Excellent tips here. I hope to see more of this. Thanks.

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Glenn Stok Hub Author 2 years ago

Thank you to everyone for your comments. You are all my valued readers.

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prasetio30 Level 8 Commenter 2 years ago

nice information. I'll bookmark this one. thanks

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PastorAndrew Level 1 Commenter 2 years ago

Thanks for the info. I have been plugging along here for about 2 months and this was insightful. I loved that bit about "alot" "a lot" and "allot." LOL.

Thanks

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G Miah Level 3 Commenter 2 years ago

Glenn, i am made up after reading your hub, and will hopefully put more thought into capturing the readers attention more. Check out my 'About Him' stories and you'll see what i mean.

You've been very helpfull!

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Georgina_writes Level 3 Commenter 2 years ago

A really interesting hub - that's why I enjoy writing on hubpages, you learn something new every day from your peers - am bookmarking this hub for a leisurely read later.

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Kathy Rimel 2 years ago

Thanks for the great tips. I am new at this and trying to do everything I can to get my traffic up. Was really interested in the part about how they monitor how long each person has been on your page.

Thanks again

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Dixie W 2 years ago

Great Hub. I have looked at analytics but there is no info so guess I will take your suggestion and work it. Ha Ha

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Glenn Stok Hub Author 2 years ago

I appreciate all your comments. Thank you all for reading and commenting.

Dixie W, there is a lot of info on Analytics here on Hubpages written by very knowledgeable Hubbers. Just do a search for it.

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melpor Level 4 Commenter 2 years ago

Good Hub. I will apply all this information during my next review of my Google Analytic report. Thanks.

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ratnaveera Level 1 Commenter 2 years ago

Very interesting and useful Hub to improve quality of our writing. Your every point will be certainly helpful to get good traffic for our sites. Great Job!

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Glenn Stok Hub Author 2 years ago

Thanks to everyone for your comments. And for you kmkilleen, the answer to your question..."how did you begin getting followers?" ... I didn't to anything special. All I can say is...write and be active in the Hubpages community, and they will follow.

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Beth100 Level 5 Commenter 2 years ago

Excellent hub Glenn! You're tips will prove invaluable for many hubbers, including me. I'm just starting to work with Analytics and back linking. It's taken me a bit of time to navigate around HP, so taking it slowing and learning as much as you can is the best way to build the foundation. Again, great hub!

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Springboard Level 5 Commenter 2 years ago

Very useful information. I've been writing blogs (hubs) for a while on another site and just reacquainted myself here, I don't always consider things like keywords, SEO, or any of that stuff. I focus on the writing and the overall thought I wish to convey. But I am definitely seeing the benefit to writing not only on topic, to an audience, but also writing to help reel the audience in. After all, we write to be read, right? Thanks for the info.

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Singular Investor Level 1 Commenter 2 years ago

Excellent hub Glenn - thanks for the tips. Thumbs up. I hope you're right and that Google does penalize poor spelling ! Unfortunately, I find Google analytics totally confusing. Do you by any chance know if analytics tells you which ad. people click on on their way out ?

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Glenn Stok Hub Author 2 years ago

Singular Investor, yes, Google shows you what ads are working. But I don't know of a way to do it with HubPages. If you use AdSense on your own site, you can see what ad units work and even have a lot of control over them. Thank you to you and to everyone else for all your valued comments.

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Lady_E Level 7 Commenter 2 years ago

Cheers. Very useful info. Definitely one to Bookmark.

Thanks, I Look forward to reading about Hub ranking and Hubbers Ranking as per Opinion's comments.

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Glenn Stok Hub Author 2 years ago

Lady_E and OpinionDuck...I was going to make "Hub Ranking Vs Hubber Ranking" part of my January progress report, but decided to make it a hub by itself. The progress report grew above 2000 words and I had to cut it back. I got tied up because I just put my new business site online January 1st, which I did based on everything I talked about in this hub. Thanks for your patience.

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Tracy Dukes 2 years ago

Glenn - loved this hub, thanks.

Question: How did you create the sidebar? sorry new to HubPages!!

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Glenn Stok Hub Author 2 years ago

Tracy, welcome to HubPages. I think you're going to love it here. And thanks for following me. I'll have to go and check out your hubs, I see you already have four, good for you. As for your question, add another text module. Then before you save it, put a check-mark on the item that says to display it to the right. That makes it a sidebar. You can also check-mark two different background shades or a white background. I like to pick one of the shades to make the sidebar stand out. Hope that helps.

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catsimmons Level 3 Commenter 8 months ago

Hi Glenn, this hub is great and really did keep my attention. Thanks for the useful info. Voted up, useful, and interesting :-)

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Glenn Stok Hub Author 8 months ago

catsimmons, I guess you just proved my point. lol. Thanks for the vote up.

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jean2011 Level 4 Commenter 8 months ago

Great information Glenn, thanks again. I have the hub useful and up!

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Glenn Stok Hub Author 8 months ago

jean2011 - Thanks for the vote up. I see you are getting around. Hope my Hubs are all useful to you.

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DonnaCosmato Level 7 Commenter 5 months ago

Hi Glenn, this is another great article with lots of great advice. Just to answer a question that you cleverly embedded in the text, I think you did an awesome job of keeping my attention without boring me to death.

As a contributing editor for another site, I'd like to send you a thousand virtual kudos for the section on proofreading and grammar mistakes.

The only one you did not include is my personal pet peeve, which is using "it's" when one should use "its" and vice versa.

It's a shame (yes it is) that with all the free software programs and spellcheckers on the market so many freelance writers still publish work that is full of grammatical errors and misspelled words.

Anyway, it has taken me this long to process and put to good use the information from your hub on how to raise your hub score (it is working well, thank you for the tips.) Now I'm looking forward to watching my bounce rate decline as I use the valuable tips you have provided here.

I voted this up in hopes it will increase the popularity of this excellent tutorial and many more people can benefit from it.

Kindest regards,

Donna

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Glenn Stok Hub Author 5 months ago

DonnaCosmato ~ Thanks so much for your perceptive comments. It means a lot to me to be reviewed by a contributing editor such as you.

Thanks for adding "it's" vs "its" - that is also one of my pet peeves too. I see it much too often and it's troubling to see good authors who make this mistake without considering its effect on otherwise quality Hubs.

I appreciate the vote up. Thanks for that and for your comments.

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DonnaCosmato Level 7 Commenter 5 months ago

You're very welcome, Glenn! I forgot to add how much I appreciate your wit and your way with words. Thanks for working that other "its" in there so subtly; I was feeling brain blocked and just couldn't get it to flow :)

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PDXKaraokeGuy Level 8 Commenter 5 months ago

great article, Glenn. Up and stuff. Thanks for writing this!

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Glenn Stok Hub Author 5 months ago

DonnaCosmato ~ I actually had fun working that in. Thanks for noticing.

PDXKaraokeGuy ~ You're welcome. Thanks for the up vote and stuff. :)

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DonnaCosmato Level 7 Commenter 5 months ago

Hey, Glenn...you're welcome! I love alliteration and word plays. They are such fun and they spice up writing, don't you think? That is just one of the many reasons I enjoy reading your hubs so much:)

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Glenn Stok Hub Author 5 months ago

Donna, Yes they do spice up writing, as well as spicing up the time put into writing. So nice of you to make such a positive comment. Thanks again.

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PDXKaraokeGuy Level 8 Commenter 5 months ago

no problem, glen. Keep up the good work!

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Millionaire Tips Level 8 Commenter 5 months ago

Ha! You tricked me with allot. I was expecting another misspelling of a lot! Great hub - lots of great information on getting and keeping website readers. Love your pictures. Also like the line you added to separate your headers. I was thinking of adding photos, but a simple dash will work just as well. Thanks! voted up.

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Marla Rose Level 2 Commenter 5 months ago

Hi Glenn. Great hub with lots of useful information. I am a new hubber whose learning how to hub. Your absolutely right when it comes to punctuation and grammar. The mispelling of a word or using a word in the wrong context can be devastating.

I have a question for you. How do you get better in writing more content within a hub? Another words, how do you enrich your hub with good content?

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msshandriaball Level 1 Commenter 5 months ago

very informative, voted up!

Robin Kemp 4 months ago

I appreciate your hubs because you add value to your content. I always come away with more. You have mastered the art of engaging the reader. Thanks.

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alexandra-t Level 1 Commenter 4 months ago

you've definitely caught my attention =) I suddenly realised i have so much more to learn from you! Thank you Glenn!

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Glenn Stok Hub Author 4 months ago

Marla Rose ~ Sorry I missed your question. Writing more quality content comes from research and having an understanding of the things you write about. It also helps to pay attention to feedback and to your Google Analytics reports.

Robin Kemp ~ That's very nice of you to say that. It's good to know my methods are useful.

alexandra-t ~ I appreciate your complements. There are many Hubbers here on HP who are great at helping others. I learned a lot from them when I started out. And I still keep learning new things too.

Thanks to everyone else for your comments and your votes. I try to get back to everyone but focus on answering questions.

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